Motion comic 3 X concept storyboards(rough)

these are storyboards of the three rough motion comic ideas asked for in last fridays email. the meeting today was good, and we have quite a few ideas to choose from. Now we are all going to come up with a polished frame that captures each concept for the big meeting with Matthew Fitt next friday.

Transition/Good/bad trip

palo and Aga's meeting at the bar followed by aga's flashback

The slums (market dealing to VINE junkies included)

The idea I have for this, is that each individual once hooked onto the machine will transfer different heart rates depending on the frame of your mind and the combination of whether you bought a dodgy needle or a good needle.. good/bad trip will start at the same point... and tried to show the jacking in/transition... the feeling of getting sucked in through a portal with either bad, or good memories coming towards u from a 1st person perspective...I had a couple of ideas that could interesting.. like the character hovering onto the ground after the transition with wings for the good trip, and a hell theme for bad trip showing the character falling out the mouth of a large skull, with whisps of black smoke visable and fall smack onto the ground.. this picking up from a couple of ideas Brian spoke about last week. My final image from this concept will include colour to further capture the concept. I also thought it would be good to capture an image of what VINE could look like after the jacking transition... I'm thinking a time shift effect. like diteriation of walls and structures for the bad trip. and a 'perfect' experience for the good trip. The Idea of having the heart meter whilst in game play would be interesting as well.







Sequence Two; Aga and palo at the bar and aga's flashback of her husband kisted;



The idea for this is pretty similar to other idea's for this sequence.. you first see palo at the bar.. a closeup shot of Palo and the barman, and Aga siting watching him from a table.. she goes over and they meet to talk about the case... Aga has a flashback.. and you see a shot of the medical centre before zooming ino Aga's husband's kist. the last shot is of Aga lookin down onto the kist with tears in her eyes. (from the perspectiveof the kist. I think this could be the image to represent the flashback a least.






Sequnce 3; The slums;



This sequence starts off showing the busy market place, before cuting to a closeup of a letter box.. (knock, knock!!) with a pair of gogley eyes staring out. He asks for the secret password (ooch aye ma needle man :)), and an exchange is made of the experiene needle, and closeup of sealing the deal follows with the police/bloodlawyers taking the dealer away in handcuffs.